From a849d495f0150e43a4ca1c5c211d6aa55f15a478 Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001
From: Gary <pgx7aiqs@anonaddy.me>
Date: Wed, 17 Sep 2025 19:49:00 -0700
Subject: [PATCH] Update copy

---
 components/header.html |  1 +
 index.html             | 78 +++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++-----------
 2 files changed, 59 insertions(+), 20 deletions(-)

diff --git a/components/header.html b/components/header.html
index f0425b6..06980a0 100644
--- a/components/header.html
+++ b/components/header.html
@@ -15,6 +15,7 @@
     </a>
   </div>
   <ul class="menu">
+    <li class="menu-item"><a href="#tickets">Buy Tickets</a></li>
     <li class="menu-item"><a href="#details">Explore</a></li>
     <li class="menu-item"><a href="#lodging">Stay</a></li>
     <li class="menu-item"><a href="#contact">Contact</a></li>
diff --git a/index.html b/index.html
index 8d5a9d9..d26f25b 100644
--- a/index.html
+++ b/index.html
@@ -18,8 +18,10 @@
     <title>Shiloh Echo '25 | Make Us One</title>
     <meta
       name="description"
-      content="Every year we come together to share off-grid, self-sufficiency
-      solutions with industry experts and you're invited."
+      content="Shiloh Echo is North Idaho's annual gathering showcasing off-grid,
+      homesteading, open-source solutions. With presentations,
+      workshops, demonstrations, and hands-on villages focused on
+      sustainable and simple living."
     />
     <meta name="author" content="Shiloh" />
 
@@ -28,8 +30,10 @@
     <meta property="og:url" content="https://www.shilohcode.com" />
     <meta
       property="og:description"
-      content="Every year we come together to share off-grid, self-sufficiency
-      solutions with industry experts and you're invited."
+      content="Shiloh Echo is North Idaho's annual gathering showcasing off-grid,
+      homesteading, open-source solutions. With presentations,
+      workshops, demonstrations, and hands-on villages focused on
+      sustainable and simple living."
     />
     <meta
       property="og:image"
@@ -55,16 +59,17 @@
           <h1 class="white">Attend Shiloh Echo '25</h1>
           <div class="flex-row">
             <p class="white">
-              Join us for an unforgettable weekend where you'll discover
-              cutting-edge off-grid solutions from industry experts and connect
-              with like-minded individuals passionate about self-sufficiency and
-              building a more resilient future for our community and family.
+              Shiloh Echo is North Idaho's annual gathering showcasing off-grid,
+              homesteading, open-source solutions. With presentations,
+              workshops, demonstrations, and hands-on villages focused on
+              sustainable and simple living.
             </p>
           </div>
           <div class="button-row flex-row">
             <a class="button-4" role="button" href="#details">Details</a>
             <a class="button-4" role="button" href="#lodging">Lodging</a>
             <a class="button-4" role="button" href="#contact">Contact</a>
+            <a class="button-4" role="button" href="#tickets">Buy Tickets</a>
           </div>
         </div>
         <p class="white">Sponsored by:</p>
@@ -87,29 +92,59 @@
           />
         </video>
       </div>
+      <div id="about" class="flex-column">
+        <div>
+          <h2>About</h2>
+          <h3>Build community. Localize. Stay off-grid.</h3>
+          <p>
+            We're dedicated to cultivating and inspiring thriving off-grid
+            communities, simple living practitioners, and open-source innovators
+            with Christian principles as the framework.
+          </p>
+        </div>
+      </div>
 
       <div id="details" class="flex-column">
         <div>
           <h2>Details</h2>
-          <h3>Ticket Cost TBA</h3>
-          <h3>This year's theme is "Make Us One."</h3>
+          <h3>This year's theme is <strong>"Make Us One."</strong></h3>
           <p>
-            Concerned about ai, globalization, smart cities, surveillance,
-            digital currencies?
+            Concerned about
+            <strong
+              >ai, globalization, smart cities, surveillance, digital
+              currencies</strong
+            >?
           </p>
+          <br />
+          <p>Tired of being told you'll be replaced by xyz technology?</p>
+          <br />
           <p>
-            Want to strengthen your local community and family in self-relience?
-            This event is for you...
+            Want to help your local community and your family with Christian
+            principles?
           </p>
-          <h3>Presentations, Q & A, Expert Panel</h3>
-          <h3>With experience in:</h3>
+          <br />
+          <p><strong>This event is for you...</strong></p>
+          <br />
           <p>
-            Decentralization, privacy, christian living, open-source,
-            homesteading, permaculture, security, off-grid solutions
+            Experience presentations, workshops, Q & A, expert panels,
+            demonstrations, and hands-on villages.
+          </p>
+          <h3>Learn from the best in:</h3>
+          <p>
+            Decentralization, privacy, open-source, homesteading, Christian
+            living, permaculture, security, off-grid solutions.
           </p>
           <h3>Join us Nov. 21-23rd</h3>
         </div>
       </div>
+      <div id="tickets" class="flex-column">
+        <div>
+          <h2>Buy Tickets</h2>
+          <h3>Tickets will be paid at the event.</h3>
+          <h3>Ticket pricing TBA</h3>
+        </div>
+        <a class="button-4" role="button" href="#contact">Questions?</a>
+      </div>
       <div id="details" class="bg-vid flex-column">
         <div>
           <h2 class="white">Location</h2>
@@ -157,8 +192,11 @@
           <h2 class="white">Lodging</h2>
           <h3 class="white">25% Discount</h3>
           <p class="white">
-            Stay at the Log Inn of Bonners Ferry next door and enjoy a 25%
-            discount when you mention the event.
+            Want to make your stay even more awesome? Book a room at the cozy
+            Log Inn of Bonners Ferry, just next door, and get ready for a
+            relaxing retreat! As a special treat, mention our event and receive
+            25% OFF your stay! It's the perfect way to unwind and recharge after
+            a day of learning and connecting with like-minded folks.
           </p>
           <p class="white">Address: 43 Tobe Way, Bonners Ferry, ID 83805</p>
           <iframe